MchectorII's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sister deletes Zelda save]

Though simple,the powerful message of this animated short is presented short and sweet and makes the viewer think(and learn from the character's example of jumping to conclusions.)The ending may seem sudden but maybe the creator wants the audience to 'guess what happens next' after the ending.Would his outburst lead to punisment by his parents(if his sister should tell on him) or his apology and sister's forgiveness or just stubbornly refuse to admit his mistake,who knows,as this animation only gives a view into a problem between two characters any viewer would not know so much about(besides them being siblings and active gamers.)Anyway,this is quite a good way to remind anyone that the brain should work before the mouth as everyone will have to deal with such a problem in real life(and a clever way of using a game reference to get the message to the viewers.)It would be great to have more of this,to not only entertain but also make everyone reflect on their lives,so keep it up!

[Spiderman....Thingy....]

Though short and simple,the animation is done quite well and is great for a quick laugh('a blink of the eye' sort of way).Maybe,that's what happened to Spiderman here.

A second on the truck,
The next,squashed like a bug.

The moral of the story is that if bad guys can keep their eyes on the road,good guys should too.

[The Misunderstandlings]

This is an interesting take on a very old idea of silent films and it's good for a quick laugh(though a little bloody,but it's for everyone anyway.)So good work and keep practising!

And to all viewers,that is how you get a smoked sausage!

[If I Had One]

This would make a pretty good new year's resolution for an animator and man,you have the potential and who knows,you will make it there very soon as at the rate you're improving(and submitting),so keep it up and good luck!

And this is good for a quick laugh,if the viewer is able to 'spot' the joke,so good work!

WooleyWorld responds:

I know right. Some people didn't get the reference and I facepalm'd.
Yeah I like to think I'm learning with each animation. Do keep up, and keep reviewing.

[Skyfall - WIP -IZ]

An interesting take on a classic cartoon that has dark humor but this has a more depressing feel.Maybe it could be better if the characters were original,but parodies are quite common here and the character designs here are quite different from the real one and the plot looks interesting,so a backstory would be good.It's also nice to see that old shows from the past decade are still being remembered,so go for it!

[Flying beyond]

This is pretty good,maybe the sketchiness made it look like a practice animation,which everyone may not like(for reason unknown.)The movement is smooth and the music adds life to what could have been painfully silent,so good work and keep practicising and hope to see more soon!

EvilRay responds:

Thanks, I appreciate it.

[Music Animated!]

The music has quite a catchy rhythm which blends very well with the picture. However,while this may be more suitable to be in the audio section and that there could also be more 'interactivity' in the picture like grass and te girl's hair being blown by the breeze and shadows shifting because of the sun rising/setting,like they always say,a picture tells a thouand words,so it's up to the viewer to imagine the story while looking at the picture and listening to the music,so good work on the art and music(maybe more movement in the animation would be better next time and good luck!)

[Madness Infected 2]

The plot is original,though a little predictable,as the protanogist went against all odds to hunt down his brother's killer,not even a viral infection(maybe it did stop him in the end but it is quite obvious that the baddy ain't getting out alive too and the author's comments gave it away too,might need to watch out for that if you want to surprise the viewers.)Anyway,the action scenes are great with time and effort put into it making this enjoyable(in a good old Madness sort of way.)Good work!

[Calcium Wrath]

Unpredicable and indescribable are two words that come to mind while watching this and those are some of the things that makes Newgrounds so special.This is also strangely entertainng and quite addictive with its quirky humor and that it leaves the viewer thinking,who or what gave the Lactater his 'superpower'?(A backstory may be needed.)Great work and keep it up with the surprises!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[Flash test: "Hand drawn"]

There's nothing better than learning something new from practice,so good work!It also looks promising although it seems quite difficult to do,maybe this could be a tutorial to others who are learning.

NeonF1sh responds:

Thank you! It was actually surprisingly easy, at least to me. There are definitely better tutorials out there, I've mainly used snippets of info that I've seen from various youtube videos.